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The first Christmas ever!
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One night, Santa Clause came and all the kids said, "Who's that?"

Santa Clause said, "It's me, Santa."

But the kids didn't understand. They said, "Why are you here?"

"Because it's Christmas… the first Christmas ever!"

"Christmas," said the kids, "What's…."

"And I have presents for you."

"Presents! Yea, it's Christmas."

Have fun,
– Santa Josie

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22 new storytellers made this great children's story,
"The first Christmas ever!"
even better by writing...

  1. Storyteller stacey 17 added to the children's story:

    They opened their presents

  2. Storyteller elmo added to the children's story:

    One Xmas eve, Vicky was sound asleep. Rebeca was too.

    Soon, Santa was zooming in the stary night sky. He came down the chimney, but got a little stuck.

    "Help me," cried Santa.

    Zoe Zoe got into her Zoe-mobile and zoomed to the house and pulled poor Santa down to the living room.

    "Zoe Zoe, you fury little hero. Here's a Dora doll and a Highlights maganzine for you."

    "Thanks, Stanta."

    "Thanks Zoe, you saved Christmas for kids all over the world."

  3. Storyteller sara added to the children's story:

    Once upon a time there was a girl who lived in a small cottage.
    She didn't have anyone with her.

    One day, a fairy came and said,
    "There is a big party,
    Why don't you go there?"

    The girl said, "I don't have any nice clothes
    and I don't even have an invitation."

    The fairy said, "Here is the invitation
    and a beautiful dress."

    The girl wore the dress and went off to the ball.
    There she saw a prince and the price saw her.
    They fell in love with each other and got married.
    After that, the girl was never lonely again
    and lived happily ever after.

  4. Storyteller marissa 11 added to the children's story:

    On my first Christmas
    which was 11 years ago
    I was so excited for Christmas
    that I got up early in the morning
    and opened all the gifts
    and my brother wasn't very happy
    because that was only his second Christmas
    and my FIRST !!!

    Well i think that was the best Christmas ever
    and the first Christmas.

  5. Storyteller Anonymous added to the children's story:

    When Santa pulled out the presents the boys and girls looked at him like stranger from off the street. They were like ;Where are the gifts? Santa just stood there and siad " right here ". the children said " right were all we see is a pile of juck "!

  6. Storyteller Chelsey(18) added to the children's story:

    "It's not the box and wrapping paper that counts it's what's inside, see Yo yos" Santa said, doing yo yo tricks.

  7. Storyteller Lil Bit 23 added to the children's story:

    once there was a girl she could talk for reason one boy came to her and said hi she said nothing he said o you must be chooking he pushed her stomach hopeing something would come out she was waving her finger tring to say no suddenly she wrote on peace of paper saying her throt heartbad by:Lil Bit

  8. Storyteller syma 10 added to the children's story:

    one day there was a girl,who lost her way home, while her mom was buying things she and was playing games her left and she was left alone.then after a day she found a woman standing where her mother was and buying things and she looked at the woman and she was her mother then her mother took her home and served her food,she newed the her daughter was hungry the they lived happily ever after

  9. Storyteller isla 10 years of age added to the children's story:

    one christmas night jack heard a noise in the sky
    "look look mummy its santa,i best get to bed or santa will not come to our house and i don't want to happen"said jack in a determinted voice..

    later that night jack pit out so milk and mints pies and what he normally pits out for him after he done that jack went off to bed i forgot to say jack was only 7 it was his first christmas ever in his new house

    It was about 7.00 in the morning and jack run down the stairs falling a couple of times but he just wanted to get his presnts he had a couple well maybe a lot:

    Ds lite a couple of games for his Ds and lots more but i couldnt say alll the things he got for christmas

  10. Storyteller Anonymous added to the children's story:

    I wonder wat I'm getting so we ran to mamas room and said it Christmas the end.

  11. Storyteller Anonymous added to the children's story:

    she then loved christmas and told everyone what it was that day on there was a christmas
    for everyone and there was something for everyon georgia

  12. Storyteller Anonymous added to the children's story:

    once upon a time a girl named selena was three years old at a sleep over she had a great night this is what happened she got a visit from santa clause all the girls were screaming in fear by GEORGIA AND BELLA

  13. Storyteller chelsea 10 added to the children's story:

    one's upon a time thre was a grumpy old man. he hated christmas.know if enyone takes about christmas he would stab them and haunt them for all eternity

  14. Storyteller kate 11 added to the children's story:

    One night these childern heard these noices and they shouted whats that?

  15. Storyteller sunny (9) added to the children's story:

    Then the children opened the presents and they
    are surprised!there wasn't anything in it!And the santa clause said," You didn't tell me if you were a good child!"
    They laughed.
    (The end)

  16. Storyteller Anonymous added to the children's story:

    and it was the best christmas ever.cause santa gave the children the prettiest toys ever in the world.

  17. Storyteller ky'eisha 7 years old added to the children's story:

    dont speak to strangers mummy said emily the older one said oh never ind i'll do whatever i want.

  18. Storyteller india 10 added to the children's story:

    The children opened the presents and said "where are my presents!!!" and father christmas said "you didnt tell me and you have too much already" and the children all laughed and realized one thing that christmas isnt all about presents it is about spending time with youre family and having fun!!!!!! the end

  19. Storyteller Amna 11 added to the children's story:

    maybe we could open the presents and not tell mommy emily said

  20. Storyteller Avien Aodah added to the children's story:

    once upon a time there was a girl called smantha she was the smartest kid in school and her bff tanya to they finshed firstthey didnt wait and they know that i waited the next day i finshed first and they were alone they learned there lesson
    because wait for ur friend

  21. Storyteller alex 10 added to the children's story:

    One christmas eve all the children in barkway was wating for santa.But there mums said you have got to go the bed so all the children in barkway went to bed apart from one this boy he never went to sleep that night because he wanted to see santa but mummy said you will not get any presents so he thought about and said im tried so i will go to sleep for 5 mintues and he closed his eyes and went to sleep but instead for 5 mintues he went to sleep for 5 hours he woked up at 7.30 and he thought it was still night but it was not he was sad that he did not see santa but he got presents so he was happy but next year he stad up all night but did not see santa .

  22. Storyteller Ng added to the children's story:

    Once upon a time,there was a princess in a big palace.She was beautiful but she did not like to smile.One day,a handsome prince came to the palace and saw the princess.He played a trick and the princess smiled.Finally,they married and lived happily with each other.


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This children's story can be found in the My Baby Monsters Storytelling Library of Children's Stories, under All the Best Children's Christmas Stories, All the Best Family Fun Stories, All the Best Silly, Funny Children's Stories. It was written by Josie (Daughter of My Baby Monsters and Child Storyteller) on Tuesday, December 23rd, 2008 at 5:48 pm (Josie Time, UTC +2).

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