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Day 2: Under the sea
(a children's guide book to time travel)
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My dad just gave me a time machine …

"No I didn't, it's still mine."

… as big as this house …

'No it's not, it's just a little box."

… but I can't find any pictures …

"What about this one?"

… so I'm drawing one myself …

"Why can't I draw too?"

… of me swimming in the water …

"Swimming, swimming in the swimming pool."

… of me visiting the fish …

"When days are hot."

… but then there's a shark …

"When days are cold and days are cold."

… and the shark goes right through me ….

"Excuse me, Josie, I love the story, but is this all in the picture?"

Yes.

"But where's the time machine? And what are you going to do with the picture?"

Here's the time machine, and well I put the pictures in it of course, and then I travel down to the fish …

"In the swimming pool. When days are hot and days are cold."

… but now I can't find my time machine when it's time to come home. So I'm trapped.

"Maybe you'll get eaten by…."

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– Josie (and the daddy)

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8 new storytellers made this great children's story,
"Day 2: Under the sea
(a children's guide book to time travel)"
even better by writing...

  1. Storyteller Sebastian added to the children's story:

    The seaweed is always greener
    In somebody else's lake
    You dream about going up there
    But that is a big mistake
    Just look at the world around you
    Right here on the ocean floor
    Such wonderful things surround you
    What more is you lookin' for?

  2. Storyteller Princess Ariel added to the children's story:

    Under the sea
    Under the sea
    Darling it's better
    Down where it's wetter
    Take it from me
    Up on the shore they work all day
    Out in the sun they slave away
    While we devotin'
    Full time to floatin'
    Under the sea

  3. Storyteller Toby 11 added to the children's story:

    Will you please stop singing that Little Mermaid Disney song and tell me what happen with you and the shark.

    Did you get eaten?

  4. Storyteller Connor 8 added to the children's story:

    So there I was trapped at the bottom of the sea with a shark about to eat me when all of a sudden I realized my Time Machine had GPS.

  5. Storyteller Caitlin 12 added to the children's story:

    But since they traveled back in time to a time before GPS had been invented, it did not help them find the time machine.

  6. Storyteller Jonas added to the children's story:

    And then, a group of three brave visionaries created a new storytelling model within the most conservative company in the world.

  7. Storyteller Anonymous added to the children's story:

    but they were really the Jonas Brothers in disguise

  8. Storyteller Anonymous added to the children's story:

    you mean disco clothes


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(a children's guide book to time travel)
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