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There's an alien in my bed
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One day, there was an alien in my bed.

It was hopping around when I was trying to sleep
and there was a big light…
and then it was morning.
But it was still hopping on my stomach,
and it wasn't very fun.
So I called my dad

And I hopped out of bed,
and then the alien hopped out of bed…
but I closed the door on his nose.

OW!

Have fun,
Josie

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  1. Storyteller Anne (7) added to the children's story:

    But that made the alien angry and he punched me in the nose.

    That made me cry and the noise made my dad and mom come in to see what was the matter and they got very angry with the alien and sent him home to his mommy, because they had not given him permission to sleep over.

    And the alien's parents — alien mom and alien dad — got very angry with him and he got a really long time out.

  2. Storyteller Jon (12) added to the children's story:

    And after the alien's time out was over,
    he would not say he was sorry.

    He was not sorry, he was ANGRY!!!!!

  3. Storyteller Søren (13) added to the children's story:

    And he wanted a new nose!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  4. Storyteller Ron (10) added to the children's story:

    He wanted your nose!

  5. Storyteller Anonymous added to the children's story:

    But his parents would not let him steal anyone's nose. They said it would grow back. It did. But he still wasn't sorry. He really, REALLY wanted to punch me again!!!!!!!

  6. Storyteller Tony (9) added to the children's story:

    So the alien came back to my house and tried to bop me on the nose.
    He thought I was sleeping, but I was just pretenting.
    He couldn't trick me again.
    This time I was ready.
    I bobbed left.
    I bobbed right.
    I bobbed middle
    and grabbed his nose and ran.

  7. Storyteller Tara (6) added to the children's story:

    All of a sudden he grew a new nose which was very long – so long that he tried to trip me up with it but I jumped over it. I dropped the aliens nose that I was holding in my hand and it exploded as soon as it hit the ground…

  8. Storyteller hanna 9 added to the children's story:

    then the alien left for 5000 years in alien years. then he came back and he got nose chopped off again.

  9. Storyteller The Daddy added to the children's story:

    The alien told me that he was sorry, and that he wants to be your friend.

    He promises not to punch anyone in the nose or hop on their tummy again.

  10. Storyteller Echuk Chauhan (13) added to the children's story:

    It make the alien and me , a good friend…
    we both become good friends and we share the email addresses , so that we can chat and be friends forever. When he will go back to his planet with his parents..

    Now he is in his house at a diffrent planet names as ALLIE……

    He e-mail me and always tell about his planet….

    We are very GOOD Friends now…….

  11. Storyteller Luke added to the children's story:

    Then one day the alien wrote me an email inviting me to visit his planet and stay at his house for a sleep-over!

    I asked my mum and she said, "yes, as long as your dad can drop you off and pick you up," so I packed all my things and dad took me in his space ship to the planet 'Zoocumbar-itsyweeny-tinyweeny'.

    I was sad to see my dad go, but the alien's mum and dad made me feel very very welcome. They even tried to make Earth food (but got it a little muddled).

    First I had Mincemeat Crumble with Gravy, then for pudding i had Strawberries with Cheese Sauce.

    It didn't taste very nice, but they tried their best, so I made sure I made lots of "mmmmmmm!" noise's while eating.
    …..then suddenly there was a loud "BANG!!!!"

  12. Storyteller zse-ana 10 added to the children's story:

    I went to run and then the alien stared at me with an evil look. I was so scared my heart was beating real fast.

    I could barely breathe. I wanted to go home. I wanted to be at home in my own house with normal food and where it was nice and snuggly.

    I shut my eyes as hard as I could and pretended I was dreaming but…

  13. Storyteller Anonymous added to the children's story:

    HE GOT GROUNDED FOR PUNCHING ME IN THE NOSE. HE GOT DOUBLE anrgy1. AND THEN VICKY SHOUTED THERE IS A THUNDER STORM COMING.

    DID VICKY SAY THUNDER STORM? SHOUTED THE ALIEN.

    YES SHE DID, BUT THEY ARE SCARED. ELMO GOT IN THE DOOR JUST IN THE NICK OF TIME!

    LETS WATCH SESAME STREET, SHOUTED MAX. BUT FIRST WE NEED TO HAVE DINER.

    WHEN ZOE WAS COOKING, THERE WAS A BIG CLAP OF THUNDER. LIGHTING FLASHED AND RAIN CAME POURING DOWN IN BUCKETS. THE POWER WENT OUT TOO.

    WHO TURNED OUT THE LIGHTS? MAX SHOUTED.

    NOBODY, GIGGLED ZOE. THE STORM JUST GOT A LITTLE MAD.

  14. Storyteller Alicia ,8 added to the children's story:

    After that, the alien started to get mad and started to get his gun and shot the boy and the noise made mom and dad come up to the room and then a troop of aliens killed them.

  15. Storyteller Lisa, 9 added to the children's story:

    And then the alien started walking towards me with an evil glint in his eye. He laughed.

  16. Storyteller Olivia, 8 added to the children's story:

    The alien started walking towards me because he wanted to pick my nose again.

    The alien had a twisty neck (because this alien was very special), blinked its eyes 2wice, spun around 3 times and said, "RUN RUN FASTER!"

    He ran faster. He caught me and his mum pulled us apart from each other.

    She said, "I think its time you went home Missie."

    I said, "I want to go home anyway."

    Bobby's dad phoned my dad to pick me up. My dad came in the nick of time.

    "I never even liked that stupid alien," I said…. but to make him 'appy, I said, "Talk to you on msn 2nite. Bye bye."

    When I got home, I fell straight asleep.

    … and she never woke up!!!!!!!!!

    (she didn't die, she was just soooooo tired)

    THE END

    by Olivia and all the other people who made this good story up.

  17. Storyteller Vance 8 added to the children's story:

    Then the aliens got extremely upset because I didn't get on MSN, so they launched a nuke at the United States. But the missile got off target and flew toward China.

  18. Storyteller LynLyn14 added to the children's story:

    That was NOT the end. I logged on to MSN and the creeper alien was stalking me. I called the police and he was arrested and criminally prosecuted.

  19. Storyteller LynLyn14 added to the children's story:

    I ate a kid. Cause the alien broke out of jail and told me to.

  20. Storyteller LynLyn14 added to the children's story:

    Go to the alien's house and smell his mom's old socks.

  21. Storyteller LynLyn14 added to the children's story:

    They're so nasty, but they taste good.

  22. Storyteller LynLyn14 added to the children's story:

    His mom found me and was mad cause I ate her socks. Then she apologized for yelling and sat me down on her bed. She said "I'm an astronaut for NASA and my next mission is to explore Mars!" I said, "Okay, fun!"

  23. Storyteller Brandon 14 added to the children's story:

    Hi, I have a lot of issues I'd like to discuss.

  24. Storyteller camow 18 added to the children's story:

    then three light years away he wus punished 4 600000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 thowsoond years THE REAL END

  25. Storyteller calvinc.m.c.4 added to the children's story:

    i killed him after after his punishmint ,i wus 100years old

  26. Storyteller calvin m. clinton4 added to the children's story:

    he NEVER came back AGAIN… what happens next? YOU DESIDE…

  27. Storyteller Chimp 2 added to the children's story:

    And the alien came back with all of his alien friends with their killer rays. they attacked all the little kiddies.

    When a killer ray zaps you it burns your skin off first making it ver paiful, but that isnt the worst part. Your nervous system will stay intact and you will feel everything that happens.

    Next the killer ray will start dissolvin your eyes which ends you being able to see stuff but you still feel (don't worry) and you can't scream cuz if you do the aliens will come down and stuff your mouth with socks.

    their sweat is actually acidic to our meaty and hydrogen based body so it dissolves your mout leaving nothing but a big cavity in it's place.

    it hurts like getting burned a thousand times over with hot oil.

    anyways, the laser gun should have finished you off by then because if you haven't t=died of the actual affect already you would have died of the pain. yes you can die of pain.

    :) well have a nice day!

    ps: bush is an alien and wants to rule the world. lollipops to the kids who egg his house :)

  28. Storyteller Chimp 2 added to the children's story:

    Hi, i'm an alien and i like to eat non-smart people brain.

    they taste like chocolate.

    yum.

  29. Storyteller jonathan 15 added to the children's story:

    I went to run and then the alien stared at me with an evil look. I was so scared my heart was beating real fast.

    I could barely breathe. I wanted to go home. I wanted to be at home in my own house with normal food and where it was nice and snuggly.

    I shut my eyes as hard as I could and pretended I was dreaming but…

  30. Storyteller jonathan 15 added to the children's story:

    The alien started walking towards me because he wanted to pick my nose again.

    The alien had a twisty neck (because this alien was very special), blinked its eyes 2wice, spun around 3 times and said, "RUN RUN FASTER!"

    He ran faster. He caught me and his mum pulled us apart from each other.

    She said, "I think its time you went home Missie."

    I said, "I want to go home anyway."

    Bobby's dad phoned my dad to pick me up. My dad came in the nick of time.

    "I never even liked that stupid alien," I said…. but to make him 'appy, I said, "Talk to you on msn 2nite. Bye bye."

    When I got home, I fell straight asleep.

    … and she never woke up!!!!!!!!!

    (she didn't die, she was just soooooo tired)

  31. Storyteller jonathan 15 added to the children's story:

    The alien told me that he was sorry, and that he wants to be your friend.

    He promises not to punch anyone in the nose or hop on their tummy again.

  32. Storyteller jonathan 15 added to the children's story:

    But that made the alien angry and he punched me in the nose.

    That made me cry and the noise made my dad and mom come in to see what was the matter and they got very angry with the alien and sent him home to his mommy, because they had not given him permission to sleep over.

    And the alien's parents — alien mom and alien dad — got very angry with him and he got a really long time out.

  33. Storyteller jonathan 15 added to the children's story:

    And after the alien's time out was over,
    he would not say he was sorry.

    He was not sorry, he was ANGRY!!!!!

  34. Storyteller florence 10 added to the children's story:

    every day he would plan of punchiing her again and giving her an evil laugh and evil smile.every day i would worry what about if he mudered me .would i ever have a nose again?

  35. Storyteller Anonymous added to the children's story:

    I went to run and then the alien stared at me with an evil look. I was so scared my heart was beating real fast.

    I could barely breathe. I wanted to go home. I wanted to be at home in my own house with normal food and where it was nice and snuggly.

    I shut my eyes as hard as I could and pretended I was dreaming but…

  36. Storyteller Tiffany 11 added to the children's story:

    I wasn't the alien suddenly tripped me with his 6th leg. I was sick with the alien, so I decided to try something on him. I made a magic potion made of licorice and candy. Then I caught him and put him in a high chair, then I feed it to him. After that he exploded right there. I watched the whole thing. He never came back again.
    THE END

  37. Storyteller Tiffany 11 added to the children's story:

    to chimp nice!

  38. Storyteller Isobel 12 added to the children's story:

    But, a year later, I saw the alien out of my window. He was glaring straight at me, with a evil glare. Was it the same alien? I doubted it. I saw his explode last year. Unless… The explosion made him go back to space. Or maybe it was just a ghost? but it wasn't because I saw him jump into my room by the window. Glass had shattered everywhere.

  39. Storyteller alicia atkinson 1000000000000 added to the children's story:

    then u die cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooollllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll lllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  40. Storyteller Avery 9 added to the children's story:

    And then Micheal Jackson took his nose off and put his nose on. Micheal Jackson was looking like a troll.Then fire was coming out of his nose.Then Micheal Jackson ate the alien and the kid.Then he was dancing.

  41. Storyteller nothing added to the children's story:

    as micheal was doing the moonwalk, he suddenly began to feel ill, and ran into the bathroom. An hour passed, he emerged from the bathroom, feeling relieved. ¨It´s time to go back to Neverland Ranch¨ he said…

  42. Storyteller LOOOOZa added to the children's story:

    Except then micheal died so a surgen cut open his body and found me and the alien fighting and threw us out the window…

  43. Storyteller bonnie 10 added to the children's story:

    But as I lay on the grass my body shuts down and i faint… but to awake on an operating table and i was frightenend as they cut me open and i saw all my organs they took everything out of my body and ate it… Tis stories boring venessa said and she put the book down.

    .THE END.

  44. Storyteller rachael mcneil 10 added to the children's story:

    as i closed the door the alien was angry.since it was angry it began to grow so i went outside to play but the alien had grown so that it went right through the roof.

    THE END.

  45. Storyteller Anonymous added to the children's story:

    and it gave me flowers and said i luv u and i wanted to be ur friend all the time but u calle me a miner so i was mad and i hit u hard in testicals and got really mad so u hit me in mytesticals so i got mad and i tolled my mummy and she said ur a meaner and i left home to see ur new pics on msn and i asked u to add me on facebook because i wanna show u my house in pet society but u ignored me ur whole life!
    the end!

  46. Storyteller buckow added to the children's story:

    They married and died the very other day….and after that everyone on this page lived happily ever after…….THE ENDDDD

  47. Storyteller Ellie-Rose9 Thea 10 added to the children's story:

    The alien is coming for my revenge
    His green and slimy face all over my bed
    Im petriefied what if he bangs my head?
    Theres an alien in my bed oh my goodness
    What will happen next?

  48. Storyteller Ellise added to the children's story:

    the alien screamed his head off then he blasted out with green thick gue
    that was the aleins last day…….

    THE END,
    or is it ?

  49. Storyteller Ellie-Rose9 added to the children's story:

    I can hear the spaceship landing
    My ears are throbbing hard
    I want to scream for help
    but i can't my baby sister will yelp
    I can hear it climbing up the stairs
    oh dear i'm really scared!

  50. Storyteller Thea 10 added to the children's story:

    The aliens in my room
    Oh no ill get the cuboard broom
    is this the end or is it?

  51. Storyteller MadelaneB and Ellie B added to the children's story:

    the alien cried untill she opend the door and the girl said i am so sorry that i trapped your nose in the door and i will never do it ever again.
    the end.

  52. Storyteller morgan and amellia 9 added to the children's story:

    the alien is in my room,
    oh no i will get the broom,
    so i wack it on the head,
    and now it is dead.

  53. Storyteller morgan and amellia 9 added to the children's story:

    One day, there was an alien in my bed.

    It was hopping around when I was trying to sleep
    and there was a big light…
    and then it was morning.
    But it was still hopping on my stomach,
    and it wasn't very fun.
    So I called my dad

    And I hopped out of bed,
    and then the alien hopped out of bed…
    but I closed the door on his nose.

    hhhhhheeeeeeelllllllppppppp!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  54. Storyteller alex and jack added to the children's story:

    theres an alien under my bed
    i screeched out loud
    "help help theres alien under my sheats!"
    i screamed out loud
    "help help theres an alien in my matres

  55. Storyteller morgan and amellia 9 added to the children's story:

    One day, there was an alien in my bed.

    It was hopping around when I was trying to sleep
    and there was a big light…
    and then it was morning.
    But it was still hopping on my stomach,
    and it wasn't very fun.
    So I called my dad

    And I hopped out of bed,
    and then the alien hopped out of bed…
    but I closed the door on his nose.

    OW!
    the end

  56. Storyteller Joshua Moore, Ellie ,Chelsie added to the children's story:

    MOTHER HELP ME RIGHT NOW THERES AN ALIEN ON MY TOOTHBRUSH ALSO THERE IS ONE ON MY DRAWS ITS VERY FREAKY
    IT IS GREEN
    AND HAS ORANGE EYES
    AND HAS YELLOW SMELLY FEET
    AND PURPLE HANDS
    AND BLUE FACE
    AND TOURQUISE HAIR

  57. Storyteller Chelsie added to the children's story:

    MOTHER MOTHER HELP ME THERES AN ALIEN IN IN MY BED COVERS. MOTHER MOTHER HELP THERES AN ALIEN IN MY TOOTHPASTE. MOTHER MOTHER HELP THERES A SOGY YELLOW PINK AND SMELLY ALIENS EVERY WHERE IN MY ROOM

  58. Storyteller katie 9 added to the children's story:

    it was all alone in the bedroom.
    all of a sudden he escaped through the door and went down the stairs and said
    "mummy" to the little girl!

  59. Storyteller Anonymous added to the children's story:

    NomNom

  60. Storyteller nerk added to the children's story:

    "freebokfonzoik!!!!!" i said (ailen's perspective)

  61. Storyteller Jayden 9 added to the children's story:

    The alien decided to never visit earth again after all he had seen , the only good things were Big Macs with extra lettuce and rats tails from mcdonnels and kfc (Kentucky fried children)

  62. Storyteller mitchell stretch added to the children's story:

    He came back and grabbed my nose then punched me in the face and he said"that's for slamming the door on my nose silly"


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This children's story can be found in the My Baby Monsters Storytelling Library of Children's Stories, under All of Kids' Fantastic Dreams & Scary Nightmares, Best Kids' Space / Science Fiction & Fact Stories. It was written by Josie (Daughter of My Baby Monsters and Child Storyteller) on Monday, September 4th, 2006 at 6:57 pm (Josie Time, UTC +2).

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