Comments on: Once upon a time there was a caterpillar

By: T-rish

T-rish — Wed, 24 Mar 2010 17:37:26 +0000

Once upon a time, there was a caterpillar. his name was caterpillar. His mom was a at this time. They have to be

By: T-rish

T-rish — Wed, 24 Mar 2010 17:37:04 +0000

Once upon a time, there was a caterpillar. his name was caterpillar. His mom was a caterpillar which is highly impossible since caterpillars are not sexually at this time. They have to be

By: Herm

Herm — Tue, 19 Jan 2010 17:19:47 +0000

The 'pilar got a job offer from google and made lots of money and bought foods for all its friends.

THE END

By: liz

liz — Sun, 06 Dec 2009 17:53:41 +0000

the mother died later one . cry cry cry

By: mama mag (48)

mama mag (48) — Wed, 07 Oct 2009 15:07:26 +0000

A Tiny Miracle
Once a upon a Christmas time, there was a tiny egg on an only green leaf. It was no ordinary leaf. It was a magical leaf to this little girl. It was time for a very hairy red with purple and pinky dots caterpillar to hatch! It was indeed a rare sight to behold for Catherine. She have been waiting for a very long long long time for this miracle to come to life! Catherine's eyes beamed wider, and her face lit up with joy!
Catherine knew that there will be another miracle and that's when that cute purple and pinky dots caterpillar will turned into a beautiful magnificent butterfly that will bring beauty and peace to people around her world!

By: msa572 - (23)

msa572 - (23) — Thu, 28 May 2009 05:54:24 +0000

once upon a time there was a caterpillar, flying very fast and a bit higher. he was enjoying his time while cutting the wind coming from the opposite directions. suddenly he saw a very beautiful and colorful butterfly coming from the other side. He felt that she want some help from him. He changed her way and started following that butterfly. the catterpillar realized that the colorful and very innocent butterfly is being followed by a group of eagles. Their faces were so horrible which shows that they are coming to eat that beautiful butterfly.

But when the catterpilar come to know that this butterfly is in some trouble then he tried to catch that butterfly and fetch her to a safer place and he did this very success fully. Butterfly was so happy to be safe and said thanks to catterpillar.

MORAL OF THE STORY :
It doesn't matter whatever you are, whoever the enemy is in front of you, the most important thing is your confidence in your own self. If you feel that u can do this, then sure…. YOU CAN!!!

By: Cole 9

Cole 9 — Tue, 17 Mar 2009 18:21:20 +0000

Once upon a time there was a butterfly named Myra, Myra was verrry sad because she couldnt fly so sat and stayed at the top of a beautiful 6 ft. in diameter Russian elm tree. Cole who was a caterpillar saw Myra and decided to climb up the beautiful 6 ft. in diameter Russian elm tree to save her, sadly he fell out of his chair he just happened to be sitting in at the time so Myra stayed in the tree forever.

By: jamal

jamal — Thu, 16 Oct 2008 10:47:14 +0000

once upon a time there was a beautiful girl who lived in a king place.his father worked in a king place.the girl was so prety.One day she played in a gerden near the dark lake.In the dark lake there was a beautiful fish.The fish liked a girl.One day fish saw the girl was so poor.he wants to played with her but the girl afraid.
the fish was never afraid .One day the fish give her, his our golden ball.The girl took it a ball.She was so happy then she liked to friendship with fish and last they are friendship.
They are always playing together

By: Jolissa (8)

Jolissa (8) — Thu, 04 Oct 2007 17:33:24 +0000

Magic Cheese
Once upon a time there was a catepillar named Ann. Ann was sleeping in her bedroom with her little teddy. Then there were crashing noises that woke her up. While she was awake, she wanted to read her book and eat some of her cheese but she had no cheese left. Now, she thought, "Where will I go; to Mr. Mouse's house or go to the store? I will go to Mr. Mouse's house to get more cheese." So she did. She goes out the door to go to Mr. Mouse's house. When she got to Mr. Mouse's house, there was a note on the door that said, "I am going to live in the city because there are too many cats in the country but I left you some cheese in my house. Signed Mr. Mouse." There was a glowing in his house. It was magic cheese! She took the magic cheese and she ate the magic cheese and went home. When she went to bed, she turned into a fairy. When she woke up, she went to the mirror and saw that she was a fairy.
THE END

By: Rachel (9)

Rachel (9) — Thu, 27 Sep 2007 22:22:34 +0000

Friends

Once upon a time there was a caterpillar named Josephine. Josephine was very sad because she had no friends just because she could swim. When she crawled into the water, she turned into a mermaid. Then right in front of her eyes, Josephine saw two other mermaids fighting over ovenmitts. So Josephine went over to the mermaids and said, "Why are you fighting?" The first mermaid said, "She won't give me the ovenmitts." Then the other one said, "I got them first." "No you didint!", the first mermaid said. "Yes I did!", the other one said. Then Josephine said, "Why don't you take turns?" They both thought of it for a while; then they said, "OK." So Josephine finally made friends.

THE END

By: Alexandria (11)

Alexandria (11) — Thu, 27 Sep 2007 18:08:52 +0000

The Chicken

Once upon a time there was a caterpillar. He was chased by a chicken. He ran, ran and ran. The chicken pecked his head and stepped on him. Then he ran and bumped into a cow. He climbed up the cow. The chicken jumped on the cow. The caterillar jumped off the cow and ran. He ran into a pig. He ran into the mud. Then the chicken came and saw the caterpillar. The chicken ran to him. The caterpillar ran as fast as he could. The chicken got him. He was eaten. The chicken was happy.

The End

By: Dan (4)

Dan (4) — Thu, 14 Dec 2006 11:38:11 +0000

But then a frog hopped along and saw all the butterflies. He was hungy, so he jumped in the water to play.

By: Joe (5)

Joe (5) — Sat, 15 Apr 2006 12:22:14 +0000

But their children still lived for ever and ever and ever. And they went swimming every day with all of their other brothers and sisters and cousins and uncles and aunts and nieces and nephews and 2nd cousins and so on Monarch Butterflies.

By: Martina (9)

Martina (9) — Wed, 12 Apr 2006 23:05:04 +0000

the baby caterpillars were upset because they got lonely, they didn't even have each other anymore because they grew -up, right? If they grew-up they had to say bye-bye and seperate to mate and have their own familys and children….
But that problem was soon solved, the caterpillars fell in love, mated, had children, and lived happily till they died!
THE END