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Life on Meatball Planet
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They sat on a Meatball
and it was very good
so they ate the Meatball up.

But then there was no Meatball to sit on
and they were sad.

So then they threw up
and the Meatball Planet was back.

Have fun,
– Josie

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"Life on Meatball Planet"
even better by writing...

  1. Storyteller Tene (12) added to the children's story:

    And so it went for a hundred years…

    They sat on a Meatball
    and it was very good
    so they ate the Meatball up.

    But then there was no Meatball to sit on
    and they were sad.

    So then they threw up
    and the Meatball Planet was back.

    Until one day, in the 101st year…

  2. Storyteller Andy 10 added to the children's story:

    one of them said,
    you know what
    I HATE MEATBALLS!

  3. Storyteller Bret – 14 added to the children's story:

    But then,

    Bam bam bam
    ba ba baaa
    ba ba baaaa

    Darth Vader, still hungy from his interview three stories ago decided to visit the Meatball Planet for some lunch.

    – hhhharhhhh hhhharhhhh – Hate meatballs! Oh goodie, for now you are on the path to the dark side. Like my good old friend Yoda said, "fear leads to anger, anger leads to hate, hate leads to suffering."

    Um, Darth, what are you talking about?

    – hhhharhhhh hhhharhhhh – He hates meatballs, now he is evil! Ha ha ha ha, and together we will take over the universe.

    But Darth, you love-a meatballs. Does that meat you are good?

    – hhhharhhhh hhhharhhhh – Um?

  4. Storyteller Sarah (9) added to the children's story:

    Meat Darth Vader, the nicest meatball in the universe.

    Darth, that dark helmet makes you look so evil. Why don't we try to add a little color to your outfit and turn your helmet into a flower pot?

  5. Storyteller Ellen (13) added to the children's story:

    meatball planet covered in sauce

    some places it is tomato sauce

    some places it is cream sauce

    and some not so yummy places it is burned sauce

  6. Storyteller Rosita 8 added to the children's story:

    Totally confused by this story,
    Darth Vader did the only thing he could.
    Sing a song.

    On top of Spaghetti, all covered with cheese,
    I lost my poor meatball when somebody sneezed.

    It rolled off the table, and onto the floor,
    And then my poor meatball rolled out of the door.

    It rolled down the garden, and under a bush,
    And then my poor meatball was nothing but mush!

    The mush was as tasty, as tasty could be,
    And then the next summer it grew into a tree.

    The tree was all covered, all covered with moss,
    And on it grew meatballs, all covered with sauce.

    So if you have spaghetti, all covered with cheese,
    Hold onto your meatball, 'cause someone might sneeze.

    Now my little meatball planet
    get ready to be eaten.

  7. Storyteller Andy 11 added to the children's story:

    Ewwww, Darth Vader is going to eat a booger meatball.

  8. Storyteller .. added to the children's story:

    Yum Yum Yum ..whahahaha

  9. Storyteller Benjamin (5) added to the children's story:

    Darth Vader had a plate of spaghetti all covered in cheese. He didn't hold on to his meatball. So that meatball rolled out the door. But when it dropped from the table, it made a sound. And after it did that, it rolled out the door. And the next morning, Darth Vader woke up and he saw that overnight, the meatball grew into a tree. And on that tree grew meatballs all covered in cream. Of course, burned cream. Then all the meatballs that grew on that tree dropped and rolled off the tree. And Darth Vader ate all the meatballs.

  10. Storyteller d.j. (13) added to the children's story:

    Then darth vomited it all up and they had their planet again. After a while,…

  11. Storyteller Rylee 11 added to the children's story:

    The meatball planet greww and grew into a new meatball planet and the planet alive!! and…. soon ate darth vader and the meatball planet became the meanest and badest planet of them all.

  12. Storyteller alice added to the children's story:

    The meatball planet was attacked by bad men.

  13. Storyteller Jenni 13 added to the children's story:

    The day dawned dark and dreary, the bad man arrived and was acting oh so cheery.

    "Oh, Meatball Planet, I have such ideas for you. Oh, Meatball Planet, It appears I am right on cue."

    The bad man proceeded to set up shop, everyone stood watching, prepared to see it flop. No one understood this man was so bad, they all just thought he was out of his head.

    The time came to open the doors, and the man invited the people into his store. They were shocked and mortified to see just what it was he sold, no one ever dreamed he could be so bold.


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This children's story can be found in the My Baby Monsters Storytelling Library of Children's Stories, under Best Kids' Space / Science Fiction & Fact Stories. It was written by Josie (Daughter of My Baby Monsters and Child Storyteller) on Tuesday, August 15th, 2006 at 7:14 pm (Josie Time, UTC +2).

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