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Picture this, Baby Monster Blues gets sick
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Baby Monster Snowball Blues gets sick.

Sick.

Sick. Sick. Sick.

He gets sick because he coughs a lot.
No, he gets sick because he is cold.
No, no, he gets sick because he has a cold.
No, no, no, he gets sick because he's allergic to something.

Yes, Baby Monster Snowball Blues is allergic to something.
You know what he's allergic too?

No, not dogs, or milk, or birds, or hay…
Baby Monster Snowball Blues is allergic to pictures.

When he sees a picture… he coughs.
And when he touches a picture…
he sneezes, burps, and throws up…
and then he needs to get a shot.

Have fun,
– Josie

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  1. Storyteller Mrs. Murphy’s Class (3rd grade) added to the children's story:

    So Baby Monster Snowball Blues went to the doctor
    and when he got there he had to wait.

    Wait. Wait. Wait because there was a long line.

    And while he waited, he started to melt because it was too warm.

  2. Storyteller Mrs. Murphy’s Class (3rd grade) added to the children's story:

    But he could not move to get away because he was no longer round.

  3. Storyteller Mrs. Murphy’s Class (3rd grade) added to the children's story:

    And even worse, the waiting room was filled with pictures.

  4. Storyteller John (6) added to the children's story:

    so he started to walk around with his eyes closed so he couldn't see the pictures. But then he kept on bumping into things and falling down stairs. So his parents took him to the emergency room often to get him sown back up.

    Eventually the doctors found a vaccine and baby monster blues doesn't get sick from pictures anymore

  5. Storyteller Henry (11) added to the children's story:

    Now he only gets sick from bad movies. They make him throw up icicles.

  6. Storyteller Mrs. Murphy’s Class (3rd grade) added to the children's story:

    One day baby monster snowball blues saw the worst movie ever and everyone had to run away because the icicles were sharp.

  7. Storyteller Mrs. Murphy’s Class (3rd grade) added to the children's story:

    It was Barbie Fairytopia Mermaidia

  8. Storyteller Mrs. Murphy’s Class (3rd grade) added to the children's story:

    No it was Pokemon

  9. Storyteller Mrs. Murphy’s Class (3rd grade) added to the children's story:

    Pokemon Mermaidia?

  10. Storyteller Mrs. Murphy’s Class (3rd grade) added to the children's story:

    So while Pokemon and Barbie were fighting
    baby monster snowball blues turned off the tv

  11. Storyteller Catherine 7 added to the children's story:

    and barbie and pokemon stopped.

  12. Storyteller Kim 8 added to the children's story:

    so baby monster snowball blues turned the TV back on


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This children's story can be found in the My Baby Monsters Storytelling Library of Children's Stories, under All the Best Stories of My Baby Monsters. It was written by Josie (Daughter of My Baby Monsters and Child Storyteller) on Wednesday, September 13th, 2006 at 8:42 pm (Josie Time, UTC +2).

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